- The pose was too stiff, arms should be swept back
- The bolt pistol was too big
- The hair shouldn't billow forward because it looks like she is moving forward
- To use a dark eldar wych head and then sculpt the hair around that
I was imagining a pose similar to trinity from the matrix, but sort of flying backwards.
She does look better with the arms swept back, and I reckon she would look better with a different set of legs. I've kind of gone off the idea for her now, as I just want her to be a warband member and with the coat and legs I think she would look too much like an inquisitor. So in the meantime I might try a different pose and save that model idea for something else
Something like this
Or something simple like this
I'll probably opt for the simple one so I can actually get it built and painted.